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| Celestius |
Posted: June 29, 2007 12:21 pm
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Please let me know what you think of this one! It's a bit of a mixture of things that thankfully came out cohesively in the end, emphasising a spirit of bravery in more uncertain times.
--- A sorrow, of a stirring, sleepless morn I began to dream thus with my mind wide open And t'was the strangest thing, too! With the rolls of thunder thrashing and wind thus tepid Sweet daffodils and thyme brush her brave calloused feet And a handsome honeyed sunset, shaking off the chained darkness Whose cold claws fed its radiant heart with utmost despair Upon such sacrifices, this knight threw her incense And she Sung, kneeling to the Sun with a stainéd sword Tears becoming diamonds of the changing earth, Flesh becoming blistered in cold, chiselled stone Her parchment in quilled hand, charred and yellowed Spoke of an enclave of souls fighting on the world's edge Who shook adversity from its deepest roots And invited those willing to take this challenge And t'was the strangest thing, too! I dreamt thus with my eyes wide open And my skin felt chilled, like smooth white stone So I watched as the horizon sallow, rising from its hilt And lifted my sword to catch its deeper glory; The voices of those brave knights compelled me onward Granting their sacred blessing of inner light Over the dark shadow of despair 'Be brave when the world turns its face from the Sun.' -------------------- "While 'tis noble to have loved and learned from the footsteps of your comrade, you alone are the aviator of your dreams and the catalyst of the fruition of your soul." - Myself
"Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you." - Carl Gustav Jung -- |
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